NZ Playhouse - Second Draft

The Hare and the Tortoise 

This morning we were entertained by the fantastic NZ playhouse. The actors were piped piper, hare, ginger bread man , humpty dumpty and tortoise. They were funny as at the start they told us that we could talk in the show because in other shows we can't talk. but when they do this thing when they cross there arms then we be as quit as we can as fast as we can Everyone was laughing because they were they were trying to make a finish line for the race in the show they made it but it then it kept falling apart the show is about a hare who's really mean and this ginger bread man try's to stop the hare from being mean but the hare keeps calling the ginger man biscuit boy and then then the ginger bread man called the hare a rabbit but they keep fighting and when the hare left the.Tortoise came around the set and then the hare came back after the ginger bread man and the tortoise stopped talking then the hare and the ginger bread man
had a arm reseal and no one won so it was a tie and the tortoise and the ginger bread man started training the tortoise and when the hare and the ginger bread man were doing there arm reseal they were talking And said the tortoise could beat the mean hare. The hare laughed and said that tortoise will never beat me in a race i'm to speedy for that tortoise and the tortoise won.