Simile Poem
My papa
My Papa works as hard as a worker bee, he’s always working .
He keeps trying like a worker ant, he doesn’t give up.
He is good at fixing things, like a builder.
My Papa is so smart, he’s like a dolphin, he knows a lot of things.
My Papa always keeps his things tidy like a broom sweeping dirt.
He always eats like a hungry lion, he devours his food.
My Papa always keeps us safe, he’s like a protective guard.
My Papa keeps his boundaries like a policeman.
He gets us gifts like he’s santa.
My papa will always help me out, like my teacher.
And he will never stop making good choices, like a learning student.
Kia ora Kev,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic simile poem! In particular, I like that you have used your planning to construct an interesting and engaging poem that gives your audience a very clear picture of the type of person Papa is, and what you think of him. I am sure Papa would be as proud as a peacock if you shared this poem with him.