Thursday, July 2, 2020

the 7 stars of matariki

the  7 stars of matariki


Once upon a time there was a man  who had  who 5 brothers and 


his name was Noah his brothers  were the most handsome  men in 


there village of awanui  Noah was the eldest brother, One day the 


brothers went fishing but they were distracted by the most 


beautiful singing on hikutira mountain by the time they got up 


they were enchanted by 6 beautiful woman but Noah was 


suspicious of these woman but his brothers were not they fell in 


instant love so Noah went to back to his village Awanui and talked 


to his dad Logan, he said transform into a Hawk sit in a tree and 


listen closely, while Noah was gliding through the air he could see 


his poor brothers  the had watered there garden or went hunting 


evan went fishing so the were just skin and bones they had not 


eaten in days after looking after there wahine they saw Noah and 


they gave him a thumbs up and Noah gave them a wink and the 


the boy were off to there village  Noah went up into the middle of a 


tree and listened very closely the woman were fairy woman they 


had transformed into tui's and watched Noah's brothers they started

to talk again and Noah was listening very hard they were


 planning to freeze"" them in cold ice cylinders so Noah went back to 


awanui and told his brothers those woman a fairy woman and 


they are trying to freeze you so lets make up a plan to catch them 


with my dads net so Noah transformed into a hawk and went to 


the middle of that same tree and waited util their  wahine so they 


came all holding one piece of the net and Noah swooped down and 


the boy’s threw the net and Noah helped throw it and the fairy 


woman were down and the men took them to tangaroa god of the 


sea the men told him what they wanted to with the woman they 


told please take these woman far far far away and so he did 


tangaroa combined the woman and his water made a enormous 


whirlpool and shot them into space and he let them shine once a 

year.   


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