the 7 stars of matariki

the  7 stars of matariki

Once upon a time there was a man  who had  who 5 brothers and 

his name was Noah his brothers  were the most handsome  men in 

there village of awanui  Noah was the eldest brother, One day the 

brothers went fishing but they were distracted by the most 

beautiful singing on hikutira mountain by the time they got up 

they were enchanted by 6 beautiful woman but Noah was 

suspicious of these woman but his brothers were not they fell in 

instant love so Noah went to back to his village Awanui and talked 

to his dad Logan, he said transform into a Hawk sit in a tree and 

listen closely, while Noah was gliding through the air he could see 

his poor brothers  the had watered there garden or went hunting 

evan went fishing so the were just skin and bones they had not 

eaten in days after looking after there wahine they saw Noah and 

they gave him a thumbs up and Noah gave them a wink and the 

the boy were off to there village  Noah went up into the middle of a 

tree and listened very closely the woman were fairy woman they 

had transformed into tui's and watched Noah's brothers they started

to talk again and Noah was listening very hard they were

 planning to freeze"" them in cold ice cylinders so Noah went back to 

awanui and told his brothers those woman a fairy woman and 

they are trying to freeze you so lets make up a plan to catch them 

with my dads net so Noah transformed into a hawk and went to 

the middle of that same tree and waited util their  wahine so they 

came all holding one piece of the net and Noah swooped down and 

the boy’s threw the net and Noah helped throw it and the fairy 

woman were down and the men took them to tangaroa god of the 

sea the men told him what they wanted to with the woman they 

told please take these woman far far far away and so he did 

tangaroa combined the woman and his water made a enormous 

whirlpool and shot them into space and he let them shine once a 

year.   


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