Walt we are learning to add descriptive words to add effect
My dinosaur likes to eat pizza and he likes people as long as you don’t make loud noises. If you do, he will turn against you and go wild for 5 minutes. When you want to make him go to bed you snap your fingers 3 times, then he will quickly lay down and go to sleep. When he wakes up, he goes and gets pizza out of the fridge. He heats it up with his fire powers. If he has it too hot he has his water powers to cool it down. Laser is a dark purple Dino and he likes to scare people at night. When
he goes to play outside he goes and gets some friends and he plays dunk dunk hoop. It's a game like basketball. There are two teams- red and blue. Red starts with the ball. They can run around the court once and then you try Dunk Dunk or hoop. For the blue team, they chase the runner and try to steal the ball. If they do they can run to any hoop and Dunk dunk or hoop.
Great story Kevin! Your Dinosaur sounds like it would be very handy to have around. I could use him to warm out my kai instead of using the microwave. I like how you have said that he also goes out to play his favourite game. It sounds like he is a very active Dinosaur. Next time think of a question you could ask the reader about your work and add a reflection.
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