My Holiday Writing

On the first week of the holidays it was my cousins birthday he turned ten . We went to the beach we played bat down and ball rush . As soon as me my sister and my cousins started  playing everyone joined to play too. Then we went for a swim it was so so sooo cold. My cousin Bailey tryed to push me under the water everyone did but me and birthday boy. It was too cold but I went under. I did it so he would't push me it was really cold I was shivering. I ran out of the water my mum was fishing and she caught a stingray and it ate her hook.