the 7 stars of matariki
Once upon a time there was a man who had who 5 brothers and
his name was Noah his brothers were the most handsome men in
there village of awanui Noah was the eldest brother, One day the
brothers went fishing but they were distracted by the most
beautiful singing on hikutira mountain by the time they got up
they were enchanted by 6 beautiful woman but Noah was
suspicious of these woman but his brothers were not they fell in
instant love so Noah went to back to his village Awanui and talked
to his dad Logan, he said transform into a Hawk sit in a tree and
listen closely, while Noah was gliding through the air he could see
his poor brothers the had watered there garden or went hunting
evan went fishing so the were just skin and bones they had not
eaten in days after looking after there wahine they saw Noah and
they gave him a thumbs up and Noah gave them a wink and the
the boy were off to there village Noah went up into the middle of a
tree and listened very closely the woman were fairy woman they
had transformed into tui's and watched Noah's brothers they started
to talk again and Noah was listening very hard they were
planning to freeze"" them in cold ice cylinders so Noah went back to
awanui and told his brothers those woman a fairy woman and
they are trying to freeze you so lets make up a plan to catch them
with my dads net so Noah transformed into a hawk and went to
the middle of that same tree and waited util their wahine so they
came all holding one piece of the net and Noah swooped down and
the boy’s threw the net and Noah helped throw it and the fairy
woman were down and the men took them to tangaroa god of the
sea the men told him what they wanted to with the woman they
told please take these woman far far far away and so he did
tangaroa combined the woman and his water made a enormous
whirlpool and shot them into space and he let them shine once a
year.
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